I really like the pacing of this animation. The music was a little loud at parts and distracted from the dialogue, though. I'd like to see more of the series! :D
I really like the pacing of this animation. The music was a little loud at parts and distracted from the dialogue, though. I'd like to see more of the series! :D
Thanks for the review! I tried not to make the background music too loud, though I also wanted to set an atmosphere; I'll definitely take your advice for future episodes! The newest episode can be found here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/630887
Really good animation! A little choppy, but it looks like that was what you were going for. Moved at a good pace too.
I tried to make it look like a moving sketch!
Very Nice!
Very funny and good comedic timing. I will say something, though... The girl's face looks like a man's. You need to ease up on the cheek bones and maybe make her eyebrows a little thinner.
Yeah, I was kinda going for a Xena amazon kinda thing... I may have overdone it though haha.
Flash animator and pretty okay guy
Age 36, Male
Animator
Webster University
Ballwin, MO
Joined on 11/22/05